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README.md

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   <img src="docs/images/ferese-lockup.svg" width="300" alt="Ferese">
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-<p align="center"><strong>A Wayland desktop with scrolling layouts and a shared theme.</strong></p>
+<p align="center"><strong>A complete Wayland desktop built around personalization</strong></p>
 
 <p align="center">
   <a href="docs/installation.md">Install</a> ·
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   <a href="docs/README.md">Documentation</a>
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-Ferese is a Linux desktop with scrolling columns, tree tiling, and floating
+Ferese is a window manager and desktop shell built together and configured in one place, for people who want their desktop to be their own.
-windows. It includes a top bar, Settings, notifications, desktop widgets, a
-lock screen, and screen sharing. Change themes and settings without restarting.
 
 ![Ferese Blue desktop with Settings and Control Center](docs/images/screenshots/ferese-main-hero.png)
 

docs/why-ferese.md

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 # Why Ferese
 
-Ferese combines window management and a desktop shell with one configuration.
+Most Wayland desktops are assembled from separate programs such as a compositor, a bar, a notification daemon, a launcher, a lock screen with each having its own config and its own idea of how things should look. Ferese is built as one desktop. Window management and the shell share a single configuration, so personalizing it means changing one thing, not five.
-Settings, the bar, notifications, widgets, authentication prompts, and the lock
-screen share colors and fonts.
 
 ## Choose how windows fit
 

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-          A Wayland desktop with scrolling layouts and a shared theme.
+        A Wayland desktop built around personalization.
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       <p class="product-description">
-          A Linux desktop with a top bar, Settings,
+        Ferese is a window manager and desktop shell
-          scrolling and tiling layouts, and themes that update live.
+        built together and configured in one place,
+        for people who want their desktop to be their own.
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